Not feeling very sociable tonight,
I’m in a proper mardy of a mood.
Mirrors shatter at the very sight:
Not looking very sociable tonight,
Or ever, really. Well, let’s face it, who’d
Be interested? Hence the attitude
Not being very sociable. Tonight,
I’ll wallow in this bitch of a bad mood.
Awesome job! I love poems that are short and to the point. 🙂 Good luck this month!
Great interpretation of the theme. I like it.
I like the short premise which fits with the overall tone of the poem but I’m not really certain it fits the theme. Some repetition is good and you use your words effectively to communicate the overall mood but I do think it suffers from the monotony.